Babel Novel
Hazel??? Feedback
Hi everyone,
I keep going back and forth on this next chapter...
How do we feel about Hazel's tongue regenerating? The majority of my Beta readers were on the edge of their seats, begging me to fix her tongue. I originally planted Medusa's blood in Alpha Balthazar's book to give me a way to regenerate Hazel's tongue. By the end of the Lycan series, I'm going to need a powerful mage, and Hazel is a child of Hecate.
I also received a few comments from people who thought Hazel should remain special or different and keep her disability. They liked that I had a mute who used sign language.
I was half tempted to leave it as it is... because she can talk through the mind link. But as I started to write this next chapter, I felt uncertain.
What are your thoughts? Should we grow her tongue back? I know a few people will be disappointed, but I know a large majority will be happy.
Needless to say... I didn't finish tonight's chapter, because I couldn't decide if the "phone call" will be Facetime for sign language or an actual voice call. This content is © NôvelDrama.Org.
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